i likeed alot im a big fan on ww2 polts to kill hitler so keep writing

I don't really see what this has to do with Valkyrie, but that aside, this isn't that bad. There are some typos (H instead of He and the like) and you randomly shift to second person twice here.

All that aside, the writing is pretty good. The first sentence does seem a tad unnecessary, though. The description is nice, and I'll admit I like the use of a permutation of Tresckow's line about needing to show the world that not all Germans are like him. Mostly because I love that line.

Though I think this fic would likely be slightly more appropriate in whatever category the book would fall under, I think with a bit of clean up and editing it would be fairly good.

Huh. Interesting. I was just searching through FanFics, and found this! Can you write more?

~Marina

If this has nothing to do with Valkyrie (and it doesn't), why is it in the Valkyrie section?

:] I love the book "Snow Treasure," Jan was my favourite character so it was great to hear of him here~~ Thanks for writing