Reviews for Nine to Five
Lyndseyxx chapter 1 . 7/16
This was a tough read, I powered through to the end to find out what happened but I did have to skim read a lot of it. You’re a talented writer and are great at hooking in the reader, but to be honest I found your characters really hard to like and understand. They had very little substance, Bella was particularly difficult as the whole self-deprecation thing went too far and she didn’t come across as very likeable.
Guest chapter 35 . 9/16/2019
This was a beautiful story.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
runway101 chapter 2 . 8/31/2019
I know that the story is a few years old but I’m barley in and there are so many words that are misspelled. Wood instead of would, self concuss instead of self conscious, victory’s secret instead of Victoria’s Secret, also billion air instead of billionaire just as examples.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/19/2019
did they not use protection?!
Guest chapter 34 . 11/19/2018
A lot of spelling errors. Enough to be irritating
Guest chapter 31 . 6/1/2018
I don’t know if your still checking comments but if you are, hay is for horses, hey is a greeting
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
Good story. A little bad on the spelling, but nice.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/13/2018
I think this is the first time that you spelled hey correctly
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 3 . 7/23/2016
This is just too cute
Kimmie2445 chapter 4 . 6/30/2016
Big brothers can be such a pain.
Kimmie2445 chapter 3 . 6/30/2016
She is pretty hard on herself. No self-esteem.
Thank you for all your hard work!
Kimmie2445 chapter 2 . 6/30/2016
I don't understand why Rose is being so mean.
Thank you!
twlightbella chapter 35 . 4/8/2016
Happy ending
Renee chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
OMG...did i just fall in love ?
jk chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
I could understand her thoughts about being out of his league and how he could never like someone like her...IF it wasn't to obvious that he likes her ya know? In fact its so fucking obvious bella comes off as just down right stupid...your making me hate your main character and ill let you in on a little secret writer...that's a VERY VERY bad thing for a writer
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