I love this story line. It is very very very well written (:

Kya! New chapter! Awsome chapter! Getting more and more epic! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Litereally! SO update soon!

Great chapter! I was getting more and more addicted to your story now!

No! Not a cliffhanger! I want to know what happen next so update soon, kay?

Great job with the chapter! :D

Omg, I LOVED IT! I've waited so long and I gotta say, it was worth the wait. Awsome chapter, update soon.

UPDATE! PLEASE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP?

I think the SUPER LONG UPDTAE WAIT • cough • was worth that3

But I think I'm going to die if you take this long for the next chapter. D: .

So ... uh ...

BTW. THIS IS GOING TO END AKARI & GILL, RIGHT? ;-; . Because like ... if not ... /3 . • shot •

Your story is getting very suspencful! Update soon!

So far so AWESOME!

I love it! I love it! I love the whole plot of this story. Great story!

another great chapter, this story is so exciting. can't wait to see what happens, please update soon ;D

this is so good. i want to know what happens with Gill and all that so badly. Please keep writing. :)

This is a great start to a promising fic!

However, I must point out that there are quite a few punctuation errors. At the end of quote that is a statement, remember to put a comma.

For example,

"N-no. I don't know who he is" I stuttered...

should be

"No-no. I don't know who he is," I stuttered... Take note the comma.

Please continue writing!

T_T This story is so good! But sad... Aww poor Vivian and Angela : Gill, why'd you break up with her? D:

I like the plotline and how you change the POV every so often. Little Vivian is so sweet and nice :)

It's doing good so far! :D