hey! love this story, i can actually feel what bella feel.. great story! but the fact that they didn't have, well, safe sex for the first time, is little bothering me.. overall, great story! :)

Hey I love your story it is just soo awsome. Bye bye then wouldn't want to keep u from other readers reviews.

aww ..your story is so sweet.

but i'm curious. when did he start to love bella? he was still with her when bella went home.

Very very good :o)

-A

some kind of wonderful is my favorite movie, i've watched it a gazillion times, and yet, eveytime gets teared up. i think you did a great job with writing this story. bravo

-t

I dont know why but this story didnt feel right. in the end when they were to gether my chest still hurt and I wanted to cry... I feel like jacob should have shown up and Edward come to realize he wanted her. There was too much angst and it made me nauseous, wanting to throw up. There was to much damage for it tto be fixed that easily. Bella was strong yet she was to weak.

It was good but i feel the solution was wrong and I feel sick and disappointed. you are a good writer but it just felt wrong.

sorry.

*claps hands* Bravo! So good! I freaking love this ! Thank you.

Hey! this was FANTASTIC, and i read your profile(yes i was curous about you, lol. i have another friend from the UK and he is so sweet, you are too) and i think you're right. i was reading your story and got down to the ending(right before the lemon) when I desperately wanted to know who you were! because your writing is THAT AMAZING. when i found who you were i also found that this was rated M, aka lemon... it was such a surprise because i didn't know this was a lemon and so you can probably guess that knowing it was a lemon DID take all the romance out of it. but it's not your fault, you had to do it. but next time i read a good E/B fic i am NOT looking at the rating, lol. thanks for the tips on your profile also, they're great and so right.

Oh yeah, I'm so glad i didnt forget! you know when i found out that this was a lemon? yeah i also found out that it was a ONE-SHOT! only a ONE-SHOT! now im sad. what will i read when you're not there to update? what ever will i read! please right something else soon, i would love to read more from you, your writing is fantastic.

I loved this story. Even though I've seen Some Kind of Wonderful about a million times, I still got teary eyed at certain parts. Even knowing they would get together, my heart still broke for Bella. This just goes to show what kind of writer you are. Not many stories can evoke emotions in me but yours did.

On a side note...guys are idiots.

And I agree with you on the review thing. It amazes me when really great stories don't get many reviews, and it surprises me even more when the really bad fanfics get over a thousand. That's why I try to review any story that a I read, whether it's critical or not. So, here I am, paying it forward. By the way, Pay It Forward is a really great movie. I highly recommend it.

Anyway, I loved this story and it was great how you made it your own but still kept to the movie story line. I look forward to more of your stories. : )

Aaw, that was so sad and sweet. However, I would have liked it more if there's a part where Edward explained how he felt about kissing Rosalie and stuff, and how he realized that he is in love with Bella.

Great story though, xD.

-PochiMicky

I like that movie and I liked this story. Even knowing how it would turn out, my heart still hurt for Bella. I thought you did a good job of conveying the emotions here and I liked the lemon at the end.

OMG...that was so good. I almost didnt read it since he was asking rosalie to the prom but im glad i did...GREAT JOB!

awesome job!

LOVED IT!

You did an amazing job!

aha i really like this!