Reviews for The Third Time is the Charm
cristyna23malfoy chapter 41 . 8/19
This was a really engaging story. The fact that it covered three, almost four periods of D&H's life kept me interested through the end. I must say that I really really disliked Draco's character though. He never did anything truly impressive, and I believe that he never was the man H deserved. Every criticism she had of him is FACTS. So I was a bit unhappy about the turn the story was taking, but I must say you really saved it with that ending. Great job. I expecially loved the last chapter, as it made me cry like a baby. That chapter showed real growth.
The only other criticism I have... Is that i think the story would have worked without the sexual assault, that was handled a bit sloppily and hurriedly, and so in my opinion it was very distracting and out of the blue in a bad way. Other than that really nicely done story.
Snape has to be my favorite.
Beefuf chapter 1 . 8/7
A fabulous story...it kept me up most of the night to read it all. Definitely one I’ll be returning to!
quarantine2020 chapter 2 . 6/12
wow things have escalated QUICKLY
MarciKyle chapter 41 . 1/26
Oh Lordy this story is fucking amazing. It instantly became part of my top 5 Dramione. Just damn
MinaSeraphina chapter 15 . 9/23/2019
I’ve been trying to give this story a chance, I really have, but your characterization of Draco is really awful. It’s like you have tried to go for angst but it all just ends up being mental/emotional abuse on Draco’s part. He has zero redeeming qualities in this fic. Having Hermione put on a brave face but still lament over her “love” for him isn’t actually brave, it’s gross and disturbing. She isn’t a bit courageous, she is needy and dependent. I’m sorry to say I can’t suffer through another chapter of this.
Lola kitty chapter 2 . 8/15/2019
I re read this every few years ..love it every single time ...the characterisation is brilliant
Guest chapter 41 . 7/17/2019
Rereading. Thanks author.
RavenclawMommy20 chapter 14 . 3/11/2019
I hate Draco I’m your story! You do well with making him this...horrid but secret character
RavenclawMommy20 chapter 3 . 3/11/2019
Wow...this made me hate Draco SO much. Well portrayed here as a horrible guy...it actually made me throw up, reading how he did that to her...probably because that same situation happened to me...
AnnaOxford chapter 7 . 12/4/2018
I feel conflicted, this is a long fic with obliviously a lot of growing up since it spans years. But Hermione forgiving Draco after a stupid bet he made caused the death of her parents? I don’t know...
AnnaOxford chapter 6 . 12/4/2018
Not a fan of the Mary Sue moment, but what really upset me is that Draco might not have even tried to stop them...
AnnaOxford chapter 5 . 12/4/2018
You go girl!
AnnaOxford chapter 4 . 12/4/2018
Love how supportive her friends are
AnnaOxford chapter 3 . 12/4/2018
The wall of Gryffindors thing was a great idea! And it’s super sweet how all her friends danced with her :)
AnnaOxford chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Damn, ouch
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