Cool fic

I need more of this to brrathe

I can't wait to see how the story ends

Please update this story soon

Please update this story soon

that was good keep the chapters coming

So what if naruto turns into a perv? He's got HALF the leaf after him and EVERY SINGLE GIRL from the filler arcs too... He could be a bigger perv then Jiraiya and MOST wouldn't even NOTICE... Since he's PRACTICALLY tripping over women that want to bed him! At least Jiraiya would bring him outta the "dense as cobalt" and "girls have cooties" phases and into something we would RECOGNIZE!

Besides (and this is cannon), he's supposed to jump-start THREE clans right? The uzumaki, the senju and the namakazi? How exactly does one DO that with ONE GIRL?... Logistics aside, she's gotta be prego for nine months for EACH... Then the time to heal... It makes for a PATHETIC life for HER! Especially with naruto's supposed "unlimited stamina"... All in all, to get with ONE girl, seems like a PUNISHMENT for her.

OMG, the people of konoha (at least the sannin) WITH A BRAIN IN THEIR SKULL! This is going to be a very different story! "save the explanations"? "They don't NEED to know"?... WOW what a very INTELLIGENT argument! I am SO GLAD someone else noticed this!

Good story i really liked it just hope that you finish it and didn't abandoned it.

Wow I like it gonna follow this one!

nice

really good story. I wish you would continue. I will be waiting! :D

this is great can't wait to read more

This is starting out great. I hope and wish you well if you continue to write this story out. I will be outstanding.

interesting story if i get it right the confession might happen during wave looking forward to more