I like the emotion behind this, the view on life as a tree is iconic and understandable. The poem does'nt rhyme, but of course it doesnt have to! the rhymth works, thats why it counts aa verse. One point I have tto make would be that you run it through spell check before publishing. There are quite a few errors spelling and grammar wise.

This is good, I would love to see how your style develops as you write more...

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Hey loved it. Im new and I thought that this is probably the best way to get people to pay attention. You were the first person I read. Keep working and it will work out. It was great!