Please keep on writing

I'm in love with this story! You're such an amazing writer, please continue and update

Can't wait for an update! already have this story bookmarked!

I know I'm about four years late but are you continuing this story? Hope you will because I would love to read more of it. I know exactly what Ziva's going through, and relate to stories like these. It's a great story, please write more! :)

I really wish you'd continue! Please? :)

I really wish you would update this story again, I know its been a while since you have but i would LOVE to have more of it! It's really good and I'm interested to see what happens next.

that was good loved it

More please! It's really great! I can't wait!

WOW! This is so great! I CAN NOT wait for more! Great job! More Please?

hey

i really like the story i cannot wait till you update. let it be soon

i hope you wont forget

I love it. Please hurry and update with the next chapter. Can't wait till the next ones up. Great job so far!

Chez xoxo

To me, it happends so fast.

It just starts and it ends.

It's really good. Good ideas but add more to it..

Well that was great. The pictures were an excellent idea.

What is it that McGee pulled up on the plasma? You got me intrigued.

This story is kind of okay, but I think there are a few things that kind of feel wrong.

For instance: there are more kinds of self harm than cutting. And even were Ziva cutting, she's an adult, and she's smart. She would know better than to cut her arms. There are other places to cut, for example the thighs. It just seems odd that she would pick the most obvious place to cut, especially if she wanted to hide that fact.

Another thing is just the reasoning: WHY is she cutting? I think you could delve in a little deeper to her feelings.

And there are a few grammar promblems.

For example:

“Ahh, N-N-no B-B-Boss, I didn’t m-mean it t-that w-way.” Stuttered McGee...

That should be:

"Ahh, n-no B-B-Boss, I didn't m-mean it t-that w-way," stuttered McGee...

Unless it's a complete sentence the comma goes inside the talking marks, and the next word has a small letter, not a capital. If you Google English grammar there are sites that can help you with that, or you can get a beta.

Still, it's an interesting premise. Keep writing.

keep going!