Reviews for Heartbreak Tomatoes
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21
I love this story and thank you for making content for these under appreciated characters
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Very original and happy story :-)
Snowgem33 chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Best break-up ever.
(Then Green Lantern and Shayera walk in while they're having their own mini-celebration, cuz someone said Vixen and a couple others lost their sanity, and Vig picks up a tomato and starts a food fight )
TheHauntedKeyboard chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
this was AWESOME! How did you come up with this?
Autobot Mech-Ops chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
LMAO LOL
marmoki chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
I honestly couldn't stop laughing throughout this fic, and yet it was so heartwarming as well. I'm really glad to see something from Mari's viewpoint when she (eventually) breaks up with John. And the fact that she deals with it by throwing tomatoes at an effigy of her ex with four awesome half-naked superheroes? Best. Therapy. Ever.
FaerieQueen3 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Lol! Oh my gosh, when he said to "Skivvy down to our boxers" I literally burst out in hysterical laughter!

N.C
dwparsnip chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
"Can I put on pants yet?" Sir Justin asked politely.

LMAO. Hilarity in the extreme. Thanks for the laugh this morning. Well done.
acount dead chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
o man that is so funny i wish there was an episode where that actuly happen if you could rate these thing i'd give you a 10 out of 5 it was so funny
The Cleric chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I was curious about the Vig and Vixen-centric one-shots you mentioned in your review. Just finished this one and I really like the story and your characterizations. It almost goes without saying that however John chose to end things with Mari there would be painful emotions on her side. The heartbreak tomatoes certainly are a novel solution though and at the end of the day I think she'll be just fine. Well done!

-C
judy chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
LOL, Vixen is a lucky lady,

she got 4 guys to help her out...
mangaanime chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
this was so cute I could cry, I wish someone would do this for me after a breakup :[
OhtarIstar666 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
This is amazing and awesome and really really funny.
dicaeopolis chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
There's so many stories that focus on John/Shayera. Why there's none that talk about Mari, I have yet to figure out. I mean, she got left behind. She's never had a happily-ever-after and the way things are going, she most likely never will.

Except in this story, of course. Which is precisely why it's going on my favorites list.

~Lilah
Fox Moonshadow chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
It took me almost an hour to read this because I couldn't stop laughing long enough to read! You know your humor, loved it.
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