excellent. are you going to finish this story?

please please update asap love it

cool story! good job!:)

i love it omg i really do i love u and plz plz plz plz keep writing bye

ily!

xD!

this is very suspenseful

OH MY GOD! I LOVED IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

actually, it is possible for humans to change their eye color. not by will though. a person with blue eyes can have green eyes or pale eyes depending on the weather or what their wearing. it happens to my friend often. but...it wouldn't fit with the story.

i love the story btw, update soon D, and please, don't take any offence to my note above D

amy

Great summary I love the part when you said her eyes went from brown to red

This is good! Please update soon!

wow-o-wow-o-wow!

W-O-W! please update this is the most interesting story ever.

I'm intrigued, this is different. It seems your Bella is a vamp-but not quite? She and Edward need to meet again in the woods. She must be curious about him as well?

herdnerd

It's sounding really good.

I'm very interested to know whats happening, you had a very interesting summary that got my attention very well.

I look forward to what happens.

:)

I like it. Now, is it going to follow the Twilight story line or will it veer off in a different direction?

Not that I mind, I'd like it either way. Although, my only concern is that when will BxE be getting together?

awesome!