I think it's great that someone had the sense to write about Martin's feelings after Rose died. It quite baffled me as to why she wasn't mentioned much later!
Love your story!
I'm available to beta read, for anyone who actually cares.

like it

I loved your story/song

i really like this! i think i may go see if i can d/l the song somewhere. _ very well done

Jolly good show, wot wot? Keep on writin' you rapscallion!

Awsome! really powerful! I've always wondered what Martin thought after Rose died, and you've given me some idea.