This was really cute. Didn't make Bobby too nice, didn't make him too mean. It was just right.

loved it

LOVED IT! You are by far the best writer in this fandom. Write more please!

That's right Jackie, you show him! Lol. I *sigh* love this. Bobby's line at the end makes me think of "it's the start of a beautiful friendship", just a little more "Bobby-ish" lol.

I loved this, adorable :)

I thought this was an awesome story. I love young Jack stories. You should write more.

Aw, cute.

Wow That was cool

I seriously love how Bobby initiated Jack more as their brothers by taking him to the gym. I can just picture it with out you wrote it out.

Love it.

again an awesome story!

Okay you got me again with another Bobby line. I'll be chuckling over this one for days, I just know it.

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"Ice cream's for pussies," Bobby said, hanging up his jacket and kicking off his shoes.

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This is almost as good as the "f**ing fairy princess" explosion. I am really starting to enjoy this guy's attitude.

He was supposed to stop wearing the bandages, he didn't need them anymore. He had to give Evelyn credit, she hadn't said anything when he asked her if they could stop at the drug store on their way home to get more gauze because he'd run out. She knew he didn't need it – she'd just heard what the doctor said, but she just gave him a small smile and said okay. He knew it was stupid, but he just didn't want to look at those angry red lines, healed or not. - Ugh, that's so horrible. I hate that he feels this way. I mean, I can totally see it, but I still hate it, lol.

"Well, hey there, Jack." Mike knelt slightly and held up his hand, like he wanted to high-five, but Jack just stared at him, his hands stuffed in the pockets of his jacket. - Dude, not only is Jack too old for an awesome high-five, but he's also too cool :P

"We all got scars, kid," he said gruffly. "Ain't nothin' to be ashamed of." - Oh. Bobby. Love.

This is Evelyn Mercer we're talkin' about – she put up with my shit for years, she can sure as hell handle one little fairy. You need to grow -"

Jack's fist connected with Bobby's jaw before he had a chance to finish the sentence. - I'm not sure I should find this as funny as I do. For starters, it's the beginning of the nicknames. Secondly, eleven-year-old Jack punching Bobby? Just the image it gives me has me giggling. On a more serious note, I 3 Jackie and I don't suppose being called a fairy then was any easier than it was when the movie took place.

"I meant for you guys to go get ice cream and see a movie, not come home all banged up." - I can't see these guys going out for ice cream and a movie, lol. In fact, I bet Evelyn couldn't either.

One of my favourite things about your writing is the Jack/Bobby everything. Everything sounds lame but I'm serious, lol. The dialogue, the thoughts, the actions they have around one another - it's all really perfect. Even if their just taking the piss it's perfectly written and I love reading it.

This was really awesome! I loved seeing all the boys together. It wasn't just Bobby and Jack all the time.

You wrote it wonderfully and really got the characters' personalities down. Great story! :)

amazing story, amazing plot, youre an amazing author!

THis was really funny and absolutely believable. I love the dynamic you set up between the brothers, it's absolutely wonder-fal.