| Reviews for Deliver Me |
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Bb34 chapter 3 . 4/13 It pisses me off that they steal his money. |
Bb34 chapter 2 . 4/13 It pisses me off so much w |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 12 . 3/25 The Ministry along with The Auror guard should be brought up in charges for killing Hedwig in front of Harry That is emotional abuse and And Animal Crulity. And as such should be confronted for what they did. |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 11 . 3/25 Wills can be challenged. And since The Weasleys and Dumbledore betrayed Harry and thus his families They can lose what was given to them. And from what was revealed their is a good chance That the Weasleys and possibly Dumbledore betrayed Lily's Birth Family. |
Vampireking40 chapter 9 . 1/25/2019 They got just what they deserved and maybe Harry will convince Percy to take his side after the boy reads the article that will be in the prophet. |
Vampireking40 chapter 7 . 1/25/2019 Great story so far and to think the Weasley especially Ron and Ginny along with Hermonie are not even ashamed of what they did to Harry. |
HALLEYPADALECKIACKLES chapter 16 . 7/21/2017 O que mais odeio, é quando não completam a estória se mão for pra terminar porque começar. |
Xzeria chapter 14 . 12/1/2015 Hey loved your story and will probably read the next chapters written by the author who adopted it but i'm french and for your number 15 traduction cream of the crop is crème de la crème in french |
HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 7/17/2015 It's July, as per you. He's been there 569 days. That's ALMOST 1 year 7 months, meaning he was placed there around January, BUT you say his trial was in the summer. There are 365 days in a year, meaning that the trial was either the previous summer, or TWO summers ago, which can't be 569 days. Two summers ago would be at least 730 days if in July, a little less if in August. It couldn't have been in June as they are still in school, and that would make it more than 730 days anyway. You also don't say what year he just finished before the trial. I am going to assume Remus died with Sirius in the Dept. of Mysteries making it just after 5th year, in July or August. So which is it? 365 days or two years? |
j swoog chapter 11 . 7/16/2015 10/10 would read again |
hawkswench chapter 14 . 7/2/2015 Just went to both sites of the people that have adopted this story, can't say that I have high hopes for their version. |
hawkswench chapter 16 . 7/2/2015 Please not Harry as a girl, I have read several of them and they usually end up pretty stupid. |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/1/2015 The story is reasonable, but I get frustrated looking forward to a chapter and finding another bunch of explanation. |
Illucia chapter 14 . 7/1/2015 I fear this plot is stretched too thin. While I enjoyed all the different scenes, there are now many fronts which has to be monitored and it seems to weigh the pace down. Not to mention all those french oc's. Just might be too many. I read in the a/n's that weasleys are doing so well because all cant be smooth sailing for Harry. And I realised things have been too smooth for the weasleys. Obviously they are a bit handicapped mentally or they wouldnt truly believe what they are saying. I mean to believe they could just of course get harry declared incompetent and all. Yet theyve not really lost a thing. I think you should dish out some misfortune to thei direction as well. |
Illucia chapter 11 . 7/1/2015 Why was there any money in the potter vaults and Harrys heit vault? I thought the ministry took it all. This is thrilling, not too angsty because Harry had people in his corner but still feels unjust because the Weasleys and other traitors really are not suffering at all |