Compelling intro - interested to see where this goes

Did Sam kill himself?!

really sad at the end. so you could think he gave up and passed away or it's like he knew that he was save and would be able to rest easy for the rest of his life . for me it his the second way because i kinda hate to think that one of em dies. still love it

OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING

Holy shit! Did Sam die? I'm so confused.

Omg please separate your comments at the bottom from the story. It just completely ruins the story and is very frustrating. Like put a line under the last sentence of the chapter and below that write whatever you want. Hope you take this advice because I'm struggling to just make it through this story. And that's sad how it's taking away from the enjoyment of your great plot.

I read your story in two hours. It's awesome. I'm just slightly confused about the epilogue. Did Sam die or did he just pass out? Personally, I'd like to think of it as an open ending, an happy one. Jood job anyway!

Did he pass out, or did he just randomly die?!

I'M confused as well as other people he so that pretty mean he should have deserved living in peace with John and if so at least he died inPeace in Deans arms

poor sammy

you are quite evil but enjoyable so.

Ok you will rarely read reviews from me but you just kind left it...you are a good write but resolution and continuity is needed.

I'm 14, I wouldn't want to have a surgery. :( Did you end up needing it?

My guess is it's his parents who hurt him.

*Waves frantically* I play softball too! I'm a pitcher! Who! Represent!

I like this story! :)