Reviews for My Mine
GoGothGirl chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
i dont know if i should be delighted or depressed. but it feels good (contradiction, contradiction) to come back to KH fandom after a long recess. too bad i cant play KH II without sobbing at the randomness of time. -sigh-

huzzah for roxas who beat sora at the end. he's a tough cookie. personally i think roxas is a more tragic hero than sora can ever hope to be. although why anyone would want to be a tragic hero is beyond me.
Syhren chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
WAH~!

First off, THANK YOU FOR MY CHRISTMAS GIFT! :) You're totally super special awesome, you know.

Anyway! Though this is NOT the story I asked for .! I still liked it! :D!

The Axel scene at the end was so sad! ;_;! Zomg!

Bah! You write Sora very well! I liked the apart about him not usually thinking about stuff. Very appropriate.

YOU PUT IN THE PARTNER THING! YAY! Very very very cute.

I really liked the lack of Kairi.

You should keep writing these! I know, I know. It's a oneshot. That doesn't mean I'll stop encouraging you. WRITE MORE!

And finish the final chapter of your other story o.o!
Hell's Jester chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Aibou is not really homoerotic, (though all us fangirls will fight to defend it) it really just means partner, kind of like friend (only closer? _ hehe)
GrammarNazi101 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I don't really have anything to say about this, but I still wanted to tell you that I read it. It was good -the above average good, not the "it sucked but is acceptable" good.
Miss Four chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Ahh...nice. Very nice.

I'm always happy to see Canon Yaoi, especially AkuRoku, since said couple is so terribly tragic, but this was...wonderful. One of the best pieces conerning any Kingdom Hearts couple I've ever read, seriously.

It seems to me that, as we learn more about Axel and Roxas, the more the devolpers of KH want us to believe they're "special buddies". In my honest opinion, Axel loved Roxas and Roxas loved Axel, but whether they were IN love with eachother is debateable.

Agh. I digress. Great piece, and awesome job!

-Has no Constructive Crit. to give-