I swear this is one of the best shiznat fanfic out there. I've been reading this ever since it started and I keep on reading it all over again. Good job.

Wow, it's so crazy to think that I was here when this story first started and that I'm finally seeing it finished. In some sad way it's an end of an era, since I remember this story came with the huge surge of fans in late 2008 and all throughout 2009 and 2010. I'm really glad to hear that you're doing well and that you even had to time to give us a bit of an epilogue treat.

This story is gorgeous. Though I don't know what your original piece will be like, if it's anything like "Arranged", it'll definitely do well. In fact, I was thinking by the 17-18th chapters that this was written just the way romance Hollywood film makers love their movies. It has a bit of that push-and-pull great romance that we're most of us can't help but love. Beautiful story.

I'm glad that you're giving "Arranged" an original version. There's a big difference in quality of writing between the first chapter and the epilogue-and it ought to be shown! Just like how most of your reviewers have grown with you, we're happy to see your growth.

While we're sad to see you leave the fandom, we wish you the best of luck! I've supported you from the first day of this story and will continue to do so outside of this medium. Hope your surgery goes well too.

I would just like to thank you very much for writing one of my favorite Mai Hime fictions. You have no idea how many times I've read this story and I would gladly read the original. Never stop creating.

This is certainly one of my favourite ShizNat stories of all time :) Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

So happy you finished this . I had to reread the whole story agian . Hahaha . .this is great story . :)

Haha this chapter was adorable, and completly out of nowhere, seriously i never expected this to be updated xD
I'll be sure to give myself a reminder somewhere to check out your original story, good luck with it!

Greetings Notori the Storm Wolf! I am so sad and happy at the same time! I'm happy that you came back and completed this wonderful fic and sad that you will be departing us again until late this year to post the another version of "Arranged".

I do thank you for coming and listening to your readers and our comments. Also, I do hope your surgery goes well and your recovery!

I so eagerly look forward to the new version.

Take care...ciao!

Love this! Though it's 2017 i'm still reading shiznat stuffs, i just miss them. Keep writing though.

Woohoo! I dnt know how many times i've rea this story,, but i still do enjoy it the same! :)

I love Happy ending!;)

Woohooo! Bravo! Bravo! Very very great story author-san! I wish to read more of your masterpiece! :)

Wow...I'm not sure if I read this before and sent you my heartfelt sincerity that I really enjoyed this story. I can imagine the feelings if one were to enter into an arrange marriage. The flow, emotions, and imagery blended seamlessly.

Thank you for writing this story and posting it for everyone to read.

Please continue to write and let your imagination go.

All I have to say is, this is truly an emotional roller coaster. It's about feelings, perceive it and understand it. You did such a good job in explaining why they acted the way they are. I really love how you developed their relationship. This is pure romance and thank you for the great ride!

Wooow.. this story is the best ShizNat i have ever read so far since i started reading fanfiction(and that was almost 3 months ago).. this is really a great story,. All the things im looking for, friendship, trust, loyalty, love .. wheew.. really nice story .. i hope i can read more stories like this in the near future.. You wrote this in a really interesting way and for me, its full of emotion and I really enjoy it. A lot. Thank you author-san!

Undoubtedly one of the best ShizNat fanfics I have ever read in my life.

Great story, although I do not like your characterization of Natsuki, because your Natsuki is a useless damsel in distress and Shizuru had to constantly save her, besides your Natsuki is incredibly dense to the point of being complete idiot, one of example when she decided to make out with Takeda in order to forget Shizuru. This was sheer idiocy! I even began to have thoughts that you hate Natsuki's character LOL. I really want to know where Natsuki's sheer density originated from, I don't believe that it was ever proven in the Mai HiME that she was like that. And she definitely was not as useless as in your story.