Interesting, I liked it. Bravo.

0.o wow. never thought of Pearls in that much depth before. Kudos to you for telling such a touching story.

I remember that comic. For some reason, Pearls has become my top media interest. I do humanized concepts of characters and my own versions of favourite comics. This is a really good oneshot. You completely portrayed the both of them and how they feel about each other. Rat is the representation of pure evil and Pig is the representation of pure goodness. Very nice, very touching.

Lovely ma dear, lovely. More people should do Rat/Pig friendship fics. There relationship is really very intresting. I think this is very well written and in charector. Frankly, I'm suprised that you haven't gotten feedback on this yet, it's quite good.

Keep Writing!

-Claire

Wow. Nice work for even being the first Pearls fanfic. The flow of this was perfect. It's both sad and very touching. This is really well written. You described their expressions quite well.

This was really nice. Great job!

So sweet. Well-written. Even when only briefly mentioned, you managed to perfectly portray each character in depth. I LOVE Pearls and I'm glad someone else does as well.

As creative as I usually am, I cannot describe how great this story was. Very descriptive, and a nice short story.

This was absolutely beautiful! Yours is the first PBS fic I've read, and I must say, you've set the standard high. All the descriptions were so in-character...

You did a wonderful job!

I really like this fanfic it gives the comic characters new and realistic dimensions and over all it is written well. God job!

what a cute and friendly story. maybe there a soft spot to rat that we never see in the comics.

Wow...this is kinda sad. Poor Pig! I feel so sorry for that guy. And Rat is so mean... But I liked it (in a sad way)! It has good grammar and all that blah. So keep up the good work!

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That's such a cute idea!

I completely adored this oneshot! Great work!

Genius! I love the comic, and this is very intruging of a fanfic for this series. I was suspecting more to the series, but this one is the only one so far. Lucky it is a neat, organized tale about poor Pig. Plus, the reference about the crocs being locked out is funny, and so is Rat with his smile. That's the second time he smile, and the first that didn't result his head being blown off.

Clever. That's all I have to say.