If Beckman was willing to break Jim's heart to become an NSA trainee, she wasn't truly in love with him. And I don't see any readon Sarah couldn.t be married, pregnant and a Deputy Director. It's a desk job. She'd be in DC, relatively safe and well protected. Just a thought.

In this day and age putting out a story that Chuck and Sarah are killers on the run would probably get either them or some cowboy type with a gun killed. I would consider Beckman liable in that case. Damn good story though.

LOVE IT

Again, another good story!

Now that it's been pointed out, putting Chuck, Sarah, and Ellie's picture on the news was a great way to blow their cover.

I'm excited to read the next story of this, and hopefully meet the baby Bartowski.

Well that... This... Fucked up. In the best way possible.

Ohhhhh shit. Things are coming to a head here.

Don't know why but "Janice Beckman, no relation" gave me a real good laugh.

What a fucking beautiful chapter ending.

Though the order to take in Ellie has given this a more sinister vibe, it's still been a fun chase.

Thanks to me reading this some five years after the fact, I have seen Thor 2 so I can easily picture Zachary Levi with short blonde hair.

Times like this I say to myself, "I read too much fanfiction." Because I want to trust Beckman has good intentions now, I really do.

I'm curious as to why Sarah had to cozy up to some dude in the hotel. Or was it just a reason to have that sweet reunion?

Bum bum bummmmmm

I think I've said it in past reviews, but I like how you play out conversations between our dynamic duo. It is the minutiae that I crave most.

Beckman is an interesting characters. I've been her portrayed from evil government operative all the way up to kindly grandmother.

But what she is is a soldier, dedicated to her country, and ready and willing to make the hard decisions.

Doesn't mean I always agree with her, but I admire that kind of dedication to something bigger than yourself.

Dumb dirty Louie lucky he no get his dick chopped off. Sarah Walker is already a badass; Sarah Walker with pregnancy hormones is a goddamn force of nature.

You know at first I thought this was going to be similar to your other story, "The Upper Hand". Boy, was I wrong. This shit be gettin' cray craaaaaaay.