Beautiful story. Tragic, but heartwarming. Wonder how Ifurita will handle being human, after thoudands of years of agony. Plus, she has a penis now. Might take some getting used to.

i just read your story and all i can say is -

i've never felt so much while reading anthing before youv opened my eyes

thank you

if your a girl id love to talk(if your a guy i got to get you a drink)

damnit i'm crying again.

Eponymous,

My hat's off good sir. Very, very well done. :)

Holy Gods! What an ending!Excellent fic!

And Poor Ifurita...

*sob* Wow! That was soooo sad! Esp. the ending! *sniff* Great job! I need a hanky...

THAT WAS AWESOME! Nice work! I love it! Sad but awesome!

Wow. Gorgeously written piece. I applaud your worksmanship. The storyline is wonderful and the details are fantastic. Love your story! :)

Wow, that is really good, very descriptive. It actually felt like it could happen, if the Eh universe were real. Keep up the good work.

You've got a track record of tricky EH fics, and this one doesn't disappoint. It's nice to see something besides the normal, happily-ever-after MakotoIfurita fics, and a well-written one, to boot. Your work is unique and vital to the expansion of the EH universe and a perfect example of the unique power of fanfiction. If there's anything else up your sleeve, I'd love to see it.

Now this fic was great. It was beautiful, and had a sad ending. In short words, i loved it.

*blinks* Oh...my, this is perhaps the saddest El Hazard fanfiction I've come across. Ifurita's rage, despair, and final fate were frightening and thought-provoking. Poor Demon God. Makoto's despair was almost tangible, and his last selfless action was so like him it had an odd sense of symmetry to it. This story was terrifyingly great. Terrific and scary job.

Not bad I will be lookng forward for your next story!