You do a better job then some people at parody by adding the crucial step of humorously explaining "why" something is wrong/OOC ect. Your way of doing this with a snarky narrator is well executed. A lot of people who try to write parody fics end up writing stories that are just as bad as what they mock, if not worse because they just take all the things they dislike and amplify them 1000 times to make a story.

This has got to be the funniest fanfiction parody I've ever read. The beginning parts with Sonic, Shadow and Amy bits were my favorites XD that can poke fun at just about every romance fanfic cliche out there XD I still can't look at my first stories I wrote without cringing.

Needless to say I laughed all the way through this. Great read!

RIP Tails and Cream.

Killed off-screen or some other $hit.

Review: 10/10 -IGN

MLG Pro Hardcore Lemons and all the $hit fanfictions have.

All hail shadow bitchis I like u

LOL XD

Seems legit.

Bravo, good sir. I laughed almost the whole time.

Keep writing!

I'm crying; this was the most majestic piece of work I've ever found on fan fiction.

Oh my god this is the funniest thing ever XD

Best story EVER!

OMG my sister and I were laughing hysterically the whole time! (:

Best. Fic. Ever.

I gotta say, this was a hilarious story! You really hit the nail on the head here, except for the lack of badd speling (but hey, you already captured the essence without it). Looking at this story, it really makes me feel good about myself as a writer and reminds me just how far I've come. I mean, my early stories weren't the best, but I think they're better than the bad stories that you allude to here.

Having said all this, I do have a couple of things I'd like to point out. First of all, I don't really think that starting off a Sonic story with beautiful weather is something to be criticized. While it may not be totally original, I think it's normal for a Sonic story to begin like this. After all, it's fairly common in the games, and in my opinion, Station Square is located in whatever the heck the Sonicverse's equivalent of California is. Then again, California's not sunny all the time, either, so I understand where you're going.

Second of all, I think that Knuckles could hardly care where he sleeps or what the weather on Angel Island is. Like I said, it's understandable that you'd remark about that.

In short, funny story, great job!

Oh my...my...my...*dies of laughter*
I know I'm a little late to review this, but this is comedy gold-silver-bronze-insertpreciousmetalgemwhatev erhere. I laughed throughout this story; best. Parody. EVER. You literally covered every single Sonic cliche in one chapter.
*presses Favorite button over and over*
I LOVE IT! LOVE! IT! XDDDDDD
-BAA
P.S.: Thank you for making my favorite Sonic character awesome in this. All Hail...you know.

I laughed sooooooo hard! :D

GREAT WORK!