This is fucked up, but for some reason I seriously enjoyed it a lot. I want to read another chapter, so please update?

This was really good I liked hoe iy was a oo descriptive sometimes over Dec in ing shi makes t characters seem

Its dark, sexy n perfect

i was confused who who in the last "paragraph"? but i liked this story! when i saw the sadomasochism i thought of algolagnia :) great story, i like twisted and dark

Damn...that was mindblowing.. I usually don't read these types of stories, but you did a great job! :3 If only there was/were more.. (sorry for bad grammar) :P

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Huh
that was deep, dark, depressing and slighty fucked up
I LOVE IT!

This story was fucked. But in a good way :P I liked it will done! It's going to the favs list :)

Too sad

very few ficcts were ichigo is seme. good job

This was intense, brilliant, amazing, and so many others things; i'm having a hard time describing how I felt about. All I can tell you is that I love this story and I showed it to a friend and she loved it too. Thank you for writing this!

I would have enjoyed this more if I didn't spend every second reading this worrying about the author... I really hope youre ok :(

Damn.

That was.. good.

It was dark,

something different.

I like bow you formatted this, the way it seems so disjointed with so many single-line paragraphs.

And poor Grimmy. I wanna give him a hug and never let go.

The only thing that bugs me is that you spelled it Grimmjaw Jaggerjack. I dunno. I'm not used to seeing it that way and it doesn't look as nice.

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wow, I really dunno what to say. You've got me clenching my heart at times and then making me angry at times and then masochistic MYSELF at times, and then make me become a sadist at times when i think of pelting bullets into father Grimmy's skull and caclking at times. Bravo. I'll be looking out for your stories from now on. :)