| Reviews for A Secret in the Open |
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   Bluewarrior3 chapter 1 . 7/14 I love naruhina! Just really annoying how everyone was just spying on the two of them. Especially sakura barging in naruto's home like that. Friends are aloud to have secrets. Anyways it was a pretty cute story, i really enjoyed reading it espeially the naruhina parts!;) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2018 *insert the girl's fangirling here |
| WETBOY chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 Nice Story. |
| Newline chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 I'm amazed, even if it's not a bashing story, I can't help but hate Sakura. She barged into someone else home uninvited, act like she owns the place, continue by threatening Naruto and then interrupt Naruto and Hinata kissing because of course she needs answers and it's far more important to her that to respect her friends privacy and intimate moment. Oh ! And let's not forget about the fact that she implied that Naruto pressure Hinata for sex. How can that bitch have any friend, I will never understand. |
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| max chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 uuuuuuuuhhhh... don't you think that it's a bit to unrealistic for that? sure it's a nice one-shot but really, engaged at 16? sure it's common back then but this is a bit over the top |
| mnementh2000 chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 A fun little one-shot. I could actually see Sakura practically beating Naruto's door down and trying to clock him in aggravation. She tended to have a short fuse and a hit-first-question/appologize-later approach to him. Hence why I always felt Hinata was the better woman for him, and could never see Naruto with Sakura. |
| Ijustloveanimex chapter 1 . 10/30/2015 OMGGGGG THIS IS SO FUCKING CUTEEE |
| misschubs27 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015 I like.. my goddd... scratch that ... i love it... ! a cute one that is |
| MrBlue987 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014 ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY DOMINO'S ADVERT AT THE END OF THE FIC! |
| Flaming Rose chapter 1 . 5/26/2014 (Just stares dumbly at the screen.) |
| EagleJarl chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 Awwww, so sweet! I'm not sure how old they are at this point, but I think 16 - genin at twelve, Naruto away for four years, right? 16 is young to get married today but pretty common a few hundred years ago. I can easily see ninja kids being mature adults by 16. Fun to see how they kept it secret for years...it must have been hard to keep the Hyuugas from spotting them, given their magic eyes. Fun read, thanks. |
| Madgormley chapter 1 . 3/17/2014 Excellent story |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 Cool beans |
| NaruHinaFan chapter 1 . 1/8/2013 Wow, this was REALLY great! I loved how you tied it in with actual events in Naruto, and the part with Lee shouting about the fiery passions of youth made me laugh so much. And the ending was SPECTACULAR. Great job! :D |
