| Reviews for Protector |
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   ichbinnureinnutzer chapter 20 . 8/6 I'm sorry. This is a great story and all but I'm just not into that much drama. I swear it's nothing against you. |
| ichbinnureinnutzer chapter 18 . 8/6 Honestly they're stupid for leaving her with someone they don't trust alone. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/21/2018 Just fuck already! |
| Sauvage chapter 6 . 8/21/2018 Jack you dirty , dirty man |
| Sauvage chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 Oh jack |
| KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 2/11/2018 So hard to come by with this Oc anyway good work |
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/14/2017 I liked the story so far, but I have to say that in 33 chapters there hasn't been any real plot. I mean, the beginning was very promising, the reason for Ali to be on the Pearl was believable I think, but then you throw in Elisabeth and Teague, but you basically don't mention them again and I was kinda hoping to see Will too. I like the romance between Jack and Ali, but if there is going to be an actual storyline with real events, it has taken quite a lot of building up. Also, now there are new random characters that apparently are there just for the hell of it. This is not meant to be offensive, as I said I am enjoying this story and apart from some errors it is well written, I just wanted to leave my impression. x |
| Kagome Higurashi T chapter 3 . 1/28/2017 This is cute. But a felt sorry for Alicia. And is Weird she sleeping in the same bed with Jack o.o |
| Purplestan chapter 69 . 12/7/2016 What a cute story |
| AHChidemebabe chapter 69 . 12/2/2013 very good story :) |
| Samantha chapter 5 . 11/24/2013 I love your story! Only suggestion is to go through once more and double check for grammar errors. Can't wait to read the rest! |
| Courtney chapter 14 . 8/7/2013 Mr Gibbs is a little sweety pie!:3 |
| tanakaL chapter 69 . 6/15/2013 Ok this is the the third pirates story of yours that I have read and this one is the funniest so far. I have a good laugh while reading this story. You really brought out jacks funny side with it overpowering his true nature so good job on that! Oh and after I read all of you pirate stories I am going to be reading your dark shadows stories then work my way through the others. |
| Picky chapter 30 . 2/6/2013 Dont you think that if she were shot in the ribs then there would have been some damage to the ribs themselves. What I mean is that at least one rib would have to be chipped, cracked, or just plain broken. If it had gone directly in between the ribs then there would have been internal damage as well as internal bleeding. Sorry, I love your story otherwise. |
| C-THE-SHADOWS chapter 19 . 9/16/2012 God, Fucking Peter! I'm so happy Jack Sparrow friggin killed him! He deserved that! Peter! What a Bastardo! |
