Besides the grammar issues, I don't get why your forcing Kelly into the story. Its obvious to me that vampires, especially these ones know better then to have more humans involvement. So Edward asking Kelly to his house its amazingly out of place.

It feels like your forcing her on us now, so that you can wrap up everyones relationships in a pretty bow. Jasper and Kelly, Alice and Adrian...etc.

I really kinda hate this story so far.

I can doo without all the humans all of a sudden, Kelly and Adrian? NO THANKS.

Bella is a whiny bitch in this

What I really don't get about his story is why the fuck bella isn't with Edward. Does MATES not mean anything in this story?

What im confused about is where the hell is the first part of this story? A lesson in release?

Honestly i hope Edward and Jasper leave Bella

Colliding Meteors IS a great story! and her Peter is FABULOUS! for a character that barely got a mention and had NO DIALOG in Canon, The Peter developed by fanfiction writers is just phenomenal!

poor jasper it feels like you setting him up with the volturi whore Heidi...I always HATED her character!

Kelly is so fucking out of place in this story...they shouldn't be making friends with humans...expecially with the fucking volturri coming!
if this Kelly whore is someones mate...wouldn't they already fucking know? so just send the skank away already! shes just gonna get in the fucking way!

how cute...Kelly was gonna try to hit on jasper but then got cock blocked by Edward...then she asks if he can help her...and bam she thinks their friends? so much so that she thinks shes allowed to voice her fucking unwanted opinion about their relationships? Kelly needs to have her head ripped off...seriously just go the fuck away whore

so jasper leaves so he can deal with all these emotions...and bella has fucking nightmares? reaaaaalllllyyy? what a fuckin pussy

like we need another fucking tanwhore in the story. Kelly knows jasper is there with someone and she still trys to hit on him? Kelly can fuck off and go choke on someone elses cock! whore

What Adrian said is so true...I just went to the Twilighted site to reread some details of what happened in lesson in release, as it's been a while and I've forgotten the details. Edward really, really, truly loved Bella to a point where it's scary (the canon Edward was exactly so and I believe that's what made me fall in love with him in the first place in SM's saga.) And this Bella got everything she ever wanted by keeping them both. She never really let Edward go. Therefore, at times, I could hate this Bella for her selfishness but then again, when I think about what kind of woman wouldn't if they could...I'd have to say I can't think of any...damn, two of the hottest strongest, smartest, kindest, and not to forget richest men in the fiction world giving her all the love and attention anyone could ever ask for?! Hell, who would/could resist, right? I'm a sucker for this kind of love triangle...struggle between two of the bestest men in fiction...that's pure heaven, though bittersweet

I love this! But The "A Lesson in Release" was?

Hey I was wondering where the storry A lesson in release was?