I loved this oneshot. It was quite unique from other M-rated oneshots I've read, and it might even be the best. What I liked about it is that you built a storyline into it; it wasn't only about sex. The way you planned it out was creative and worked well.

I like how Gabi had a confident, bold attitude in this story. It added to the effect of the story.

I loved the part where Gabi went to Troy's house for a sleepover. I thought it was really the defining moment of their relationship. The way Troy treated Gabi was sweet.

The end had me wondering though, which I liked. Did Troy quit or was he fired? I'd love to know, but yet again, I like the idea of it remaining a mystery. All good stories leave questions to be asked at the end.

Also, how old is Troy in here? Just wondering.

That was a cute story.

Aww this was awesome as well :D keep up the fantastic work and thanks for posting this! :)

Gah! Best (and my first time reading) Teacher/Student relationship ever! :D

Oh my gosh! Best Troyella/Twilight one shot ever. Really. Made me laugh at the twist in the end :) good job :)

Oh man, I sure didn't expect it like that... Oh god, I hope you didn't convert to the dark side! We, as Zanessa supporters, will always stay true to Zanessa/Troyella! Any thoughts otherwise are deemed as going back on this promise! Hopefully you'll realise that these stories we as writers write mean a lot to us, and is how we really feel. Again, this ain't a hate mail or whatever, I just hope you'll continue your other Troyella stories.

Holy shit... This is just rubbish! Omg why would a girlfriend do THAT? I mean, I didn't really enjoy this one as well, so I think you can continue with your usual Troyella ones. I mean, c'mon! That was just crap! Okay, this isn't a hate mail or anything, but I think you can do WAY better than this. I look forward to your other stories of your norm :)

NOOOO! What happened to Zanessa/Troyella? Well I didn't really enjoy this chapter anyway, sorry. And oh no, please don't convert to the dark side! :O Zanessa still need their supporters!

i really love it

I think it's my favorite

LOVE ITTTT!

so glad to find out he really didnt sleep with that lady .. and clearly glad they made up (;

oh gooooood they can still be together .. just without getting in trouble (;

hah oh wow

craaaaazy

hah what girlfriend ever wants there boyfriend to purposely do that .. the world may never know hah