What do you mean this was bad? This was amazing. Seriously! I loved it.

This was kinda sick, but still beautifully written.

Wow. In all honesty, it was very deep. Its none of my business but your entry does seem rather personal. (Once again I do mean what I say in the highest respect). Whoever the character is that is writing this has been through a lot of shit. Your story is amazing. Keep up the great work.

Awesome writing. Serisouly, I loved it. I kept thinking it was Mitchie talking to Nate and about Caitlyn. That's how it all played out in my head. Great job.

Kelly

wow. thats. wow.

thats really good. at first i thought mitchie was the friend.. and nate was the guy. but then tess seemed to fit in better. i dont know really.. but i like it (:

Holy crap I LUVV IT! This is the kinda story that makes me sympathize with everyone going through hard times in their lives...cuz I'm one of those people.

I luv this tho. Its awesome. Sorry it happened to you, if it did. But i love it all the same.

Oh, I seriously seriosuly hope this wasn't based on a real life situation for you... :(

Anyways, I actually found the free-verse really entertaining and enjoyble to read. The character is really interesting because she narrates it from a third person's perspective, and she's really cutting with her words and I find it cool.

Is it really weird that I thought that Caitlyn was narrating it, with Mitchie as the devious girl, with Nate or Shane in the roles of the guys? I don't know why I always see Mitchie as bad. It's kind of weird.

WOW! I love it!

and I was sure that at the end you were going to reveal the chracters!

well I think that Mitchie is the one telling the story and Caitlyn is her so called best-friend and Shane the first boyfriend and Nate the one that made excuses!

At first I consider Tess but she and Mitchie could never be best friends!

xoxo

Seriously? I thought this was absolutely gorgeous! *U*

Honestly, the feelings of betrayal and intense anger thoroughly made it to my attack my heart. My goodness, this was heartbreakingly beautiful! _

Rock on! There really is a lot of backstabbing going on in this. O.O Wow! I must say, I'm impressed! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

That was really really really good. And just wondering, did you have any certain characters in mind while you wrote this? Wonderful job! :)

okay so i imagined caitlyn as the main character and michie and nate as her so called 'friends'

that was sad i hope ur day gets better

Okay I imagined Caitlyn as the main person. And I imagined Mitchie as the backstabbing friend with Nate as the blind(figuratively) lover.

It was depressing to read and I felt terrible for Caitlyn. Because nobody needs a best friend who just throws back everything you ever did for her into your face. And yeah, Nate wasnt really worth it. But I really loved the last two lines. Seems very karmic.

Great job nd I hope you are feeling better. :)

this isn't awful, at all(:

i really, really liked this!

i personally think that it's

about mitchie, and that she's

in love with nate, and the

best friend is tess and the

ex-boyfriend is shane.

well, that's just how i see it(:

I'm sort of caught in a cloud of angst and misery right now after reading that, which means you did a great job communicating emotions. Well written and compelling and depressing. As I scrolled down I was hoping to find out who it was only because I wanted it to be Caitlyn talking about Mitchie and Nate (with Shane being the original guy). And not Caitlyn as the villianess.