This story is horrible. I can’t even start to explain the bad decisions that you made. You made Hinata look like a defenceless fool even though she is a shinobi with actual training. I can’t fathom over how idiotic you have to be this garbage you call a ‘story’.

C'mon now it was getting good too

They all gonna die with Naruto so angry

I wish kizu would just die already and leave Hinata and Naruto alone

I really feel really really bad for all of them

That was intense, I reely thought that naruhina was over, ill have more faith in u and naruhina next time

I personally love what u do at the end of each chapter its really funny, especially this one

Aaaaaaaahhhhh Sakura I'm so f-ing made at that lil whore

Damn Sakura what he hell

What, tails meant u give up right

Sakura is a b**** a** n****

Hey isn't that 'why so serious' thing from Batman (joker says that) that's really sad/funny

At first I thought this story was going to be good but your using joker from batman 2 for your mad man I can't take this story seriously

when will these continue coz I can't wait

I'm psyched to read the next chapter...can't wait