This is pretty damn fantastic and it’s a shame there’s not more to read. You could probably be published you’re so good

A story which makes me want to write, marvelous idea! Good work

This is one of the most amazing One Piece stories I have read. Seriously, how can you stop writing here? Please continue writing it!

very good

Aww Please update soon! This is awesome so far. I NEED MORE ;_; PLEASEEE UPDATE! OIHRQIOAUFBIUQWHIUFHWUHEFWIWHIUEI

I really hope you come back to this. It's pretty good. I can even imagine Luffy having a harem of pretty girls in this story as well becoming Crocodile's successor as leader of Baroque Works and a Pirate Warlord.

Pretty good.

Very interesting. I actually came up with a Baroque Works Luffy idea the other day in fact. You should continue this story.

Good fight with Robin

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

Man I hate it when i find a good interesting story that hasn't updated in a long time. My only hope is that the author returns from where ever or someone adopts the story. Please do.

Good plot:)

Hello! I remember reading this story a long time ago, and I also remember being very satisfied with it! I know you're probably never going to update it, but I wanted to say that I think it's very well written! I wish I could find the right words for constructive criticism, but I'm too biased. Thanks for sharing the story with all of us!

This story has potential. Keep it up.

Cool idea for the story! Just can't wait for more!