I was wondering if we would see what was said in the kitchen. Also "I'd erase you" was phenomenal. The set up for that was perfect. I had never heard that before. I was stunned. Keep up the work. Good Job.

Major James l, Lieutenant Tiberius and Major Kirk, huh ;)

Even though you never made the follow up in many ways I think this ending was wonderful, hope for the future after all

I just finished this story and the ending brought me to tears, seriously this jut warmed every inch of my soul. Great story!

This is an amazing story, full of creative takes on the KP universe. You are fabulous at romantic description and conveying emotions, not to mention you can really sling scientific jargon that sounds plausible! I can't tell you how many nights I stayed up too late because I had to read one more section or one more chapter. You mentioned a sequel, so I'm going to look for it. I'm looking forward to your revelations about what Kim is and what she can do now that she's had her own life-changing calamity. And I'm sure Shego is not out of the woods yet-the journey is the thing. Thank you for this.

If you need a beta for a project, I'd be honored to help out.

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very beautyfull story
enjoyed it very much
keep up the great work

No such thing as an ex-marine only former marine. Say ex is like saying he quit and marines don't quit.- Grandson of marine

HAHAHA *ahem*. That was so... hilarious. IDK. Fun and kinda kinky. So out of left field. I honestly dont know where this is going to stretch out to 140k words but.. heehee... this is crazy. More than a tad OOC but still fun :D

Love the Aladdin reference :3
I'd gush on but I'll save my review for the end

Brilliant. Normally I'm not one for song-fics but this one was brilliant. Very well written, a few small spelling and grammar mistakes but that's me nitpicking, great plot, beautifully deep and realized characters with your own added twist. All in all, great story and I look forward to reading more from you.

good story bad ending I hated the last 3 chapters

Shego fellating Kim...
My inner eyes. They bleed. And I can't get rid of it!

Yay! I actually love this and the emotions are so high! Great job and the songs really did help set the mood of the chapters.

please do a sequel this fic is awesome and realistic you've got a great talent for writing realistic scenarios for wicked artoons