I really liked this. I swear I went through half a box of tissues because I was crying so much.

Heartbroken with a bittersweet ending.

omg i cry when i read this T.T my heart is still throbbing now
anw thank you so so much for writing this story!

That made me cry, poor Naruto. Great story though.

Did he die?Please say that he got better! sob sob sob

Oh, you did a fantastic job. Thank you.

*gross sobbing* awesome story.

I hate how much I love this story. My poor heart.

Dear God above, I am literally about to cry! This story is... GAH! It's gorgeous! I don't even think I can fully explain how simply perfect this is!

Somewhere inside of me wants a sequel to see what happens next, but at the same time, the rest of me is chanting loudly in my head how beautiful it is already and how fantabulawesome this story is! Is that weird...? Oh well...

Anyways, thanks for such an epic story! (wow, and I pretty much never use the word "epic". Sheesh, what is your writing doing to me?)

Love,

チョッパーくん

omg that was so painful to read you wrote the sickness so well and vividly (in its vagueness) that i have to say thats definitely one of the best perspectives on sickness ive read in fan fiction

the love between them was something

And now im crying...well written my friend, well written.

This was written so well - it made me really depressed! I really like your writing style. I'm going to be a little critical here because I genuinely feel like your writing has a lot of good things about it and deserves some in-depth constructive criticism.

I wasn't completely satisfied with the ending though because, although it was an important advancement in Naruto's character, the ending didn't have a lot of closure. You didn't have to go into whether he lived or died, but maybe just a hint would have helped create a more satisfying ending. I feel like one of the main conflicts, the one with cancer, wasn't totally addressed. Reading is a subjective experience though, so I might not be in the majority here.

I felt that the SasuSaku portion didn't make a lot of sense. I know this story was mostly from Naruto's point of view, but I feel like I don't understand why Sasuke ever loved Sakura and how she let go of him so easily. There could have been more depth to this part of the story.

One thing I truly loved about this story was how Naruto's fever dream was written. I didn't really understand what was happening there, which I think was exactly the point. It was an interesting part of the piece because you made it so I could tell that it wasn't reality.

I also liked the descriptions of Naruto in the shower dealing with the shampoo. I just thought the actual content of that scene was really depressing, but horribly realistic.

That's it! Thank you for contributing such a great piece!

Now I'm depressed and want more of this story:)

ogm so saaad... beautiful though!
I think i'ts amazing but you should have writen more about "the love" I mean they never talked about their feelings, so I was hoping something like "my name is naruto uzumaki, I have cancer and by he way I love you" hahahahaha you know what I mean.

cheers

i have never felt so heartbroken in my short life(I had cried for a while). you did a great job with the story and your Betas aswell.

This really touched my heart and (she said while her voice was breaking) I wish the best for Naru(sniff)