Ha! Awesomeness :D

I have never seen this kink before. Oh my god, this is amazing.

Hahaha fuck this real good one! You know how to make good story to read!

hahaha YES love the tail bit i started laughing at Grimmjow's reaction. Lovely bit o' smut

O.O
*blushes intensely, dies of nosebleed*

Hot damn! Totally sexy and smooth! I loved it!

I LOVED it! Quick! We need more GrimmStark! OMG this was hot! Who would think? Stark as the semme? EXALENTIE! *and the Tail!* *Q* (drools, Nosebleed!)

;D

brilliant, adorable, absolutely in every way except that there isn't more because i want to read more and 1 chapter isn't enough. i especially like the ending.

Oh...OMG dude I love it! Its so hot and...amazing! O.O Ive seen the tail thing used before, but this one was really good! Oh, dude I loved it! I really liked how you had Grimmjow in his released form all throughout the...act of...love making. XD Oh dude that was so friggin hot! At the end I was like "Ok, now you can breath. Breath." XD Oh, I couldnt breath it was just too hot! Ah, its perfect! I love it! You really need to do more with the pairing, cause there really arent that many stories with this pairing and yours is the best by far!

I just wanna say I loved it! But not to be a buzz kill or anything Where you wrote 'La Pantera,La Sexta' the La should be El because Grimmjow is male not female. (In Spanish there are both masculine and feminine. La being feminine and El being masculine)

hehehe I had to chuckle at the last line hehe this was amzing nice job

AH! Lmao. Wonderful ending line. Lilinette never lets Stark have a proper sleep. xD

Anyway this, to me, managed to be not too sweet and not too smutty. Just enough of both.

I honestly believe that this is exactly how these two would interact if they were together in canon. Good job!

:D

This is soo nice! :3 3 Loved it!

I'll read more of your stories! XD