dude, finish the story

i didnt get the story

I loved it, it was a totally awesome oneshot.

KatiechanXoxoXSesshoukun

why is this rated M? it doesn't look complete to me.

it needs spacing between the paragraph. This story is too difficult to read without spaces

first of all, it doesn't seem that this story is complete, so it shouldn't be classified under complete. in case you are perhaps new and dont know how, you can change that by going to "publish" then "my stories," clicking "edit" and changing the status from "complete" to "in-progress."

it would be easier to read if there were spaces between the paragraphs.

I'm curious to know what's going on. :) update soon, please.

no! do they make up? do they walk away from eachother forever? I'm so confused! what happend to make them angry at eachother? what a cliffy!