Reviews for October
Lady Elena Bella Petrova chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
love this story so far! hoping to read more!
csp4 chapter 3 . 7/12/2011
:) Thanks!
csp4 chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
"...all he got was the Macarena, sung in an outrageously nasal voice" LOL LOL Jasper has been married to Alice too long. He's picking up her traits::))

"...my little drug of choice." Carlisle laughed under his breath

LOL so much for Carlisle pretending he wasn't there::)) That's actually the 2nd time Carlisle has laughed in this story! Bella's change is definately going to help the whole family!

The family should ignor Rosalie if she makes any comments. Then wait until Bella wakes up & let her take on Rose::))

Wish Esme had taken a 2x4 to Edward's head when he was at the piano simmering in self-absorbed guilt:(

The thought of Carlisle reading a medical thriller is hysterical::))
csp4 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
"Then I've damned her soul. I've made her like us, a mockery of life." Grrrrrr it's words like this that always makes me want to bitchslap Edward! What an ass he is & he's not even trying:(
kh gggggggggggggggggggggggggg chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
keep going!
manda2784 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010
I'm still enjoying your version of the story :)
sujari6 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010
Very enjoyable story. Please update again asap.
imperfectiionsShayy chapter 3 . 5/5/2010
wow. awsum story :) i luvd this new twilight saga ending...its awsum hahah aww write more soon, it was great. :) xoxShay
iluvmypetsmb chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
i really like the you going to add any more chapters?
Simple-2-Blink chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
great story. the story line is nice and its different from a 3rd person view. i would reccommend more details to help string out the chapters. comparisons work great *evil smile*

but otherwise you have done a great job staying true to the charicters and its definately different from the other stories that Ive read :D
vampireGurl101 chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
I love the story hope you update soon
Enemone chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Amazing! I love how you took part of the book but kind of switched around a little bit. Tho I keep wondering who the vampire who wants to chomp Charlie is... Cant wait for Chapter 4!
MrsEdwardCullenP chapter 3 . 3/13/2009
This is so god!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
EdwardLovesBella02 chapter 3 . 2/15/2009
great chapter... please update soon.
EdwardLovesBella02 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
love love love it!
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