Reviews for Murder at the Whitlock Grand
KimiD chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
Woo an olive branch... he was doing a lot of thinking before he offered her the lead was he thinking, hmmm, maybe if I play nice she would let me help with the hotel...
Poor Ali but I love her already!
KimiD chapter 2 . 3/27/2014
Hey I do not blame Bella one bit! He has, as she said, been obsessive and overbearing thinking only "his" ideas are worth using on projects or changing others ideas... And this is her dream if she did as he suggested... it would be out of her hands the first day.. most likely without any say to speak of His "If you're worried about your position, we could work something out-" does not bode well for it being HER project if it was brought into the company, sounds like he wants to Bully his way into her dream project and make it His...
Huh uh!
KimiD chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
I am totally excited for Bella I am grinning from ear-to-ear for her and again you just captured me with this. You have this way of writing that just pulls me in and I want to jump straight up and down with Bella... LOL
AnimatedDanger chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
Really nice story. Please continue it. I want to see were this could be heading. I'll be waiting on an update.
LivingInALostGeneration chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
Love this story so far! Can't wait for the next update! xxxxxxxx
acekathleenmckean chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
UPDATE... UPDATE... UPDATE? Pretttyyyy please? Its a great story...GIVEMEMORE?
ThePerfectMess chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
i love this story so far! please continue it! :D
CowGirlLoopyLou chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
i 3 this story too :)
Harrigination chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
i love it :) any chance off updatin it? x
icenodi chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
Hey! I just wanted to say how much I love this particular story - and i really hope that you continue! Honestly, this sounds like the best story I've read in a really long time, but I can't say that I've read much. Anyway, I don't mean at all to pressure you, and I realise I may have just done so, but I beg - PLEASE continue this story!
HarperAndHarley chapter 3 . 10/20/2010
Love it! I hope Edward doesn't think that handing over half the leadership on the project to Bella will make her give up control of the Whitlock Grand lol. Update soon please
tahlullahbelle chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
i love the way the story started but i noticed you haven't posted anything on it in a long time. do you ever plan on finishing this story?
twilightluvr001 chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
AWW! I LOVE THIS STORY!
luvlins chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I LOVE IT! please continue!
xamyjayne chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
This is really good. I like the story line. :D

Hopefully you'll update soon, and we can find out what happens next. :)
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