Great story. Thanks for sharing.

For some reason, I imagine Dave's charachter as Murdoc from MacGyver. Maybe something to do with the 'raspy voice' you mentioned in an earlier chapter. It's a bit OOC at times, but angst can do that to a person ;) Very good story, though, I'll keep reading! Thanks for writing and posting :)

Great story. Keep up the good work.

Very nice ending! Jack and his "kids"... This is a great story, thanks for taking us along for the ride.

So great! Thank you for sharing! :)

Great ending, so fitting to the story. I love your take on Jack's situation on Edora and that Janet pointed it out. Also what a gift.:)

Thanks again for a great story.

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great story, I'm glad I finally got around to reading it :D

Wonderful and lovely story, the ending was perfect. A sequel or epiloge would be nice, but in any case thanks for writing this story and please continue to write more stories,Yol

Loved this story, all's well that ends well.

Big Hug for the story. Loved it, the ending is good showing how they came back to being a team with Janet's prod about Edroa ... always thought it was about survival rather than any else. Love the idea of Sam's present and the fact Jack managed it ... felt right.

Thanks for taking the time and sharing and I hope there is a sequel in the computer somewhere ... soon.

Very nice ending. Janet, as always, is brilliant, and Teal'c is wise in that understated fashion. It was a beautiful team moment, a nice resolution for all the angst going on between them. I'd enjoy reading that sequel, if you get around to posting it. Thanks so much for sharing.

-Bixata

Great, this story is great. I'm glad I caught up. Poor Daniel. He feels so guilty. Jack is doing the same. I'm sure Sam has dome guilt. Teal'c as usual is Teal'c. I'm glad he followed them. Jack went through a lot for General Hammond and I know he feels guilty for that. A lot of guilt is going around.

But leave it to Jack to get up and go out to be with them so that he can make ammends and not disappoint them again. Of course not thinking whatthat could do to his condition. Gota love him.

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Have been following your story with much enthusiam. Please update soon, love the story. Hope all ends well for the sg1 team. And where is Carter during Jack's ordeal? Kind of miss her input to the story. Keep up the great writing, thanks, more please!,Yol

Wonderful job with Daniel's emotions. It's sad to think he lost faith in Jack, but good to know he shouldn't have. It seems they've both got something to feel the urge to apologize for. Thanks for the update.

Very nice. Poor Daniel, started with all that anger and now he's got all that guilt, so Jack will still have a few things to fix between them when he gets better. If he gets better. It's about time the General put Jack's friendship with his team before his own guilt and shame, nice job with that. Thanks for the update.