Reviews for Vertigo
Multi Burst chapter 16 . 6/4/2013
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My favorite even though fairly old original story nice job! I am a crap writer xD

My highest reviews are 3 on a single story. Fail. Maybe I will get more sucess on my re write and my first Bolt story? :P

I doubt it myself.
Mike101 chapter 16 . 5/6/2011
This is without a doubt a 10 story. i begone reading bolt stories 2 or 3 weeks ago starting from the oldest up to yours. i read until im saved, and the ...boxcar stories you wrote also awesome. Until I'm Saved and the Vertigo sequal will forever be in my top five greatest FF stories i ever read. Thank You for writing these! i would love it if you could make another story like these two. but that would just be asking for a miricle cause nothing could top these two. people understanding animals is an idea everyone who has pets could never even dream of coming true. i find stories like these the best and the authors who write them always seem to be the best writers as well. if you make another new one you can be sure that i wil read it and send a positive review for that one as another thank you. you're the man. really hope you see this review. i would hate to never know if you got this or not but what can you do? am i right?
Blind Deaf and Dumb chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
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BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 16 . 2/7/2010
It's time for a final rating, but first I should give Until I'm Saved a rating so you can compare...

Until I'm Saved: 9/10

Vertigo: 8.5/10

Though you may be disapointed that this doesn't rise up to the standard of Until I'm Saved, I should let you know that I'm a very critical reader. Therefore there are few stories of which I give so many positive reviews.

The reason for the 0.5 difference are the new characters. In Until I'm Saved the characters were extremely likable or hatable and were easy to picture. Although you have still achieved excellence in this catigory for this story, I feel that I couldn't picture Cecil and Rex as much as I'd like to.

On the positive side, this story excelled in creativity and depth. Little clues in the begining of the story paid a large signifigance in the end. There was no useless information and everything was tied up to my satisfication.

On the original side, Rhino's past and the development of a conflict between Rhino and Bolt has never been done before. I felt like I was reading something entirely new from Until I'm Saved.

Therefore, this story recieves a well deserved 8.5/10. Please note that this is a very high rating for me to give.

Congrats on another great story!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 14 . 2/7/2010
I thought of every logical way Bolt could be revived but couldn't find any.

However, your genius mind proved superior over mind again!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 13 . 2/7/2010
This keeps getting sadder and sadder! :(

I'm looking forward to the nextr chapter, for I'm sure it will be full of twists
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 12 . 2/7/2010
NO! Bolt can't die! haha

You've succeded in leading the reader completely clueless as to what is going to happen next. You have shown us that you are not afraid to kill Bolt. That is what keep people coming back to yor story.
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 11 . 2/7/2010
This is getting more and more serious!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 10 . 2/7/2010
Once again you're the first author I've seen create a conflict between Bolt and Rhino.
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 9 . 2/6/2010
Woah! I said that outloud while reading! That was such a huge twist! Genius!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 8 . 2/6/2010
Uh-oh another side effect! I can't wait to figure out how Rhino's parents died!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 7 . 2/6/2010
That made me wonder what my dog would say if he could talk! Another interesting chapter!
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 6 . 2/6/2010
NO FAT CHICKS lol!

The suspense is biulding up, I need to know! Therefore I'm keeping this review short so I can read on.
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 5 . 2/6/2010
Once again you show me your masterful mind, I've never read a Bolt Fic where Rhino became a multidemensional character. Not only do you have him for comic reflief, but you're also useing him as a central character! Pure genius.
BobcatGoalieSW1 chapter 4 . 2/6/2010
O Rex x Mittens eh? That's the creative stuff that deems you a great writer!
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