Pretty good, actually. A few typos here and there, but I guess I can live with that. P

One thing I would suggest is to clarify what those two organizations do. Even after rereading several paragraphs in various chapters, I'm still not too sure why the Chinese and Japanese organizations have so many coincidental "run-ins" with each other. It gets all the more confusing since the Chinese are going on sneak missions so that China would win the war (against Japan, or so it seems). Other than kidnapping a political leader of a neutral country (which is quite ironic, because Russia would most definitely side with China after the Russo-Japanese War and the World Wars) in which it is implied that the Japanese organization wants Japan to win the war, I am quite confused with what the organization is fighting for. From my reading, I thought it wouldn't be logical if both organizations were really at opposite ends and yet share the same objective in missions - destroying this or taking that would help whoever is benefiting from such actions in the end, would it not?

But in any case, I look forward to future updates. ]]

Ohh..the mystery and the "ahem" builds!

You're better than I expected, Chilo.

Update soon!

Praty.

Yes! Yes! *pumps fist in air* Update! UPDATE!

Seriously, update soon :D

wow, such a longer chapter, haha _

omg, he got Sakura, wonder what he'll do. Hope you update soon

syaoran is os sexy in here. i could say i could ravish him right there and then. but i just wish sakura would do that for me. i wish sakura would just relax a little and check out the man beside her.

This one is pretty good, not the best but good anyway! Keep writin and I'll try to see if I could keep up with the program! Lol! Hah! I'll try and see how it works out. Well anyway, you're on my favorite authors list.

Watz up, Rio, this is Theimus. Loved ur story UR an awesome writer, almost better than me! Ha LOL! Well, hurry up and write the next chapters. Oh, and Im goin to start writtin fan fiction all thanx 2 u! AWESOME STORY! KEEP ON KEEPIN ON! GREAT! LOVED IT!

awesome story

Cool story, really hope he didnt rape his mom, that puts gross on a whole new level. Hopefully, next chapter comes out soon. It would be a cool plot twist if some third nation is pulling the strings,and china and japan had to work together.

Yes, Syaoran sure can be cocky.

:)

Keep up the good work!

Praty.

I want SS! WOHO! You update fast! Holy crud! Keep it up! GO! GO! GO!

Interresting fic. Keep up the great work and update it again soon!

this has a very interesting plot and i like it. I think Syaoran's giving the guy to him because maybe he believes that she's not working for the government so it was some what ok, any way, hope you update again soon _

I love how well written your story is, and the plot's looking to be great!

I also observed you needed some encouragement. Judging from the stupid people who roam about here only for sex stories and silly romance, it isn't a wonder why you haven't too many reviews.

Don't stop writing! I love it!

Praty.