That was smart. To have the amino (I forgot her name) ask hedwig what happened to Harry was clever. This looks like a promising story. I’ll be sure to read the rest!

this great.

this could definitely use some help grammatically, especially with the tenses, since you often switch from present to past tense and back throughout the whole fic rather than stay in a consistent tense. also some cleaning up of unnecessary sentences could help, such as the sentence where it said Moody didn't answer Harry because he knew he wasn't speaking to him; since Snape had already answered Harry's question, that whole extra explanation of who the question was meant for was unnecessary. also, hermione was in greece not greek. despite all that, the idea behind this was very unique and cool. i didn't connect everything until you said go back. i think this would've done well as a longer, more thought out fic rather than a rushed one shot

Oh I get it Hedwig didn't send the letter so that the weasleys would realize that he needed help

More pleAse I'm not using capital letters bec
Susie I lazy

I enjoy your stories and I found this one very interesting. I have read this story a couple of months ago and have seen that there is still no second chapter. I would just like to know if you will continue this story. I consider you an amazing fanfiction writer and can't wait for you to write more. My apologies if I sound like i'm criticising you or for any misspelling but english is not my native language and I seldom speak it.

Hi, i just want to tell you that you have potential, lots of potential. And i love your story, thanks.

Hi,
another year has passed and that means that I have to try again to convince you to continue your stories. First of all I do not mean to be rude or stalking or any other bad things that you may think of me, I just really hope that if I keep sending messages, with a respectable amount of time between them, then you will remember that there are still many of us out there that have not, and probably will never, forget your work. So here it goes again:
I love your work and have read all your stories and I really, really, really hope you continue them. They are beautiful well written and teach you a lot about many difficult situations.
If you can't write all the time, like most people, then if one day you have nothing to do and feel nostalgic please write something and post it (my favorite is Cherokee camp just so you have an idea).
Thank you so much for everything and I really hope that everything is alright with you
Inês Gil Mata

PLEASE! I AM BEGGING YOU MAKR THIS MULTICHAPTER!

Harry, you always find trouble in every form. Nice work! XD

Ah I get it took me a second that's clever! This is pretty good

I really enjoyed this fic- very well writen both structurally and grammatically.

This story is so cute! I loved it :)

C'est ce que je me suis douté, c'est la fiancée Animo
Its the fiance animo ! Thank you

D'aweeeeee the cold hearted Snape is softening up 3 Harry hugs are probably the best :)