Awwwww. This is super cute. And very in character, too, which is nice. It's very well done and a great read.

This was really great. I enjoyed reading it.

It was very nice and slightly fluffy

Ahh, friendship. It was touching in every way, and it was beautifully well written. I loved the fact that you put those reasons there for him to stay in Osiris Red. Gosh, reading this, I could see the picture clearly, and it was like seeing a part of the actual Anime. I loved it.

I could read this over, and over again, and never get tired of it. Though, one is enough for many, Lol.

I loved it~ Keep it up~ And keep writing strong~! x3

That was sweet.

Wow. I don't think I can properly put in to words how much I enjoyed reading this, but I'll give it a go.

It was VERY well written; I can tell you know what you're doing just by the flow of words. They read so smoothly, and I never find myself having to stop or go back and ask, "What the hell was that?", like I find myself doing quite often when reading other fics.

As for the idea of this one-shot; I LOVED it, simply brilliant! I like how you thought of the simplest thing, like WHY Juudai would want to continue staying in the Red dorms as opposed to moving up. I see so many fics with people having him go to Ra or Obelisk; no one ever touching on the fact that he DOESN'T WANT TO LEAVE.

I just adored how you were able to keep Juudai IC; it was almost as if I were watching an episode of GX as I read this. I could almost HEAR him saying those words! I adore his personality, so I hate it when I see other fics butcher it.

Great job with the Johan and Juudia friendship fluff; I don't have anything against slash, but I much rather read about their FRIENDSHIP, since it's something that's just so amazing to me. Then again, I just have a thing about friendship, but anyway, it's good to see someone still writing about it.

Favorite Parts:

/And yet, the most talented and gifted duelist in the entire school couldn’t have been brought out of Osiris Red with the combined force of dynamite, chain saws, and the population of the world in general asking why./

It's so true, and the idea made me laugh! I also loved the way you worded it.

/Juudai smacked at him teasingly, that warm and wide open grin blazing across his face. “You know the best reason I stay here, though?” Johan shook his head, and Juudai’s grin somehow got wider. “Because I love it here. I’m happy here.” Something in the way that Juudai said ‘here’ made Johan wonder just how happy Juudai was when he was anywhere else…then all that vanished as Juudai started to tug on his arm energetically. “Come on, let’s go have a duel! Best two out of three wins!”/

I think that little part there shows Juudai's personality as a whole.

/Juudai grinned quite, quite mischeviously as he reached out to playfully yank on Johan’s frilled shirt. “Because I’d look ridiculous in blue! It looks a lot better on you than it does on me!”/

It made me giggle.

All in all I really enjoyed reading this; it was so amazing! I wish I could forget it and read it over for the first time again. I look forward to reading more of your work, which I know I'll love just as much as this piece here.

Happy Writing!

~Scarlet Imperfectionist~

this was good i lyked readin it

I thought those were lots of good reasons. Oh and don't forget, RED IS AN AWESOME COLOR XD

so awesome lol

you manage to capture Jaden almost

perfectly and hane kuriboh and

ruby carbuncle are so cute together lol

happy writing

Lexi ~xx

*thinks* I can't imagine Judai in yellow or blue...that would be just plain weird...He's completely in character in this fanfic! Good job!

i love it keep writing ND YOU ARE SO right red is the only color for him well bye bye

I've gotta agree with XxJohanxJudaixX, this is an amazing story. And I have to agree with you, Judai would look ridiculous in blue and definetly and yellow too. If he were yellow, I swear it'll haunt my mind forever, lol.

What a stunning story. And what an awesome subject to write about also! It's just...just...Ah! Can't explain it. Your stories just captivae the imagination