I came across this story when I was feeling nostalgic for Hipphuggers fanfiction. This was such a good story! I know it's been a whole but please continue. Pablo and Elena are soooo cute and I love the interactions that Calleigh has with them. She loved them right from the start. Her and Eric have a real love for each other in story that I haven't seen or read in other stories.

I don't know if someone told you this yet, but on your Spanish, you made the most common mistake; to say "my name is" it's just "me llamo..." adding the "Es" after llamo is like saying, my name is is...

Also, "what's your name?" is "como (an accent over the first o) te llamas" because it's calleigh speaking to a young child...and Eric's conversation to the kids, you don't need to use the usted form as he is family and they are kids.

Also, the "we've been talking about.." Is translated "hemos estado hablando de..."

is a really good translator...

Other than that, I'm really liking this so far

Amazing, wonderful, lovely story. It was a great joy to read. You promise us one more chapter. Is there a chance that you'll do this. I really hope so. Please?

I just came across your story and WOW, this story is really brilliant and your writing is just fabulous. This story is certainly one of my favorites. I notice your note at the end that there will be 1 more chapter, so if you've the time will you please complete your story? I'm begging you please?
Anyway thanks for a great read, I really enjoy it very much.
By the way I notice another story of you about CSI Miami, I'm going to read it later.

Just read your story and it was awesome. It was a great joy to read, but you promise us 1 more chapter, so please update will you? One chapter pleeeeze?

This is such an amazing and wonderful story, so beautiful written too. So will you please update you promise one more chapter. I was really hoping for more. I like them to be married, maybe children of their own, but anyway please update?

I LOOOOOOOOVED your story! So amazing, i have fallen compleatly in love! :D
You are a really good author ;) You are crazy amazing :D
Thanks so much for writing this story and rock on! :D

is this your final chapter for this fic? just wondering since its really amazing and it doesnt say so in the desciption ;)

Xoxo Norwegian girl ;)

Great story, love it, please update, just 1 page according to you A/N, so please finish your story.

I know I am sooooo late but I need an ending plzzzz

awww poor Cal having to go through that all by herself as she didn't know how to tell Delko that she was still having nightmares. :( I'm really glad that Calleigh had finally been able to tell Eric that she was still having nightmares and that she was also able to persuade Delko to go n live with her at her house.

The note sounds very interesting.

I enjoyed this chapter as this is the very 1st Calliegh n Eric story that has actually grabbed my attention enough for me 2 wanna read it!

Omg I love your stories! I just read the 2 you did of csi miami and I think they're amaizing! The only thing I don't like is that this one is unfinished but they're perfect!

love this story when are you going to update

I know it's been a while since you updated this but I just read the whole story and OMG! You have to finish it! It's soooo good and I wanna know what happens. I hope you decide to finish it!