This was so cute! I loved the concept. This also totally feels like something Ren and Kyoko would do! I'd love to read more about the domestic nature of their relationship once it's estabilished :D

Very nice. I enjoyed this so story so much. Telling the story on an onlooker's point of view. Can't stop laughing especially on the BL and man-eater part. Lol.

Amazing... Except for a few spelling mistakes and typos it is written really well. And I do mean REALLY well.
Loved the story and how each character was portrayed. Even Nanako's character was well fleshed out, considering that she was a supporting character with no more than a couple of lines in each scene.
Masterfully done. Keep up the good work.

Haha, this was a great fanfiction! :)

I cannot express how much I love this fic! Thank you for writing this superb fic!

At first I had to re-check this was a Skip Beat fanfiction. The more I read the more it made sense. I totally see Ren and Kyoko doing this in the future. I kind of wish this was a longer story.
Nicely done :D

Amazing work, it's been a long time since I've a fanfic this good!

I know you are probably done with this story, but it would be really funny to hear Kyoko and Ren's POV to this story. It would also be fun if you continued on to show how the waitress reacted in the future, if she imporved her acting skills, if the two veteran actors gave her subtle advice. Great Job!

Great work!

Oh my goodness, I did not see that ending coming. And I can actually see Ren and Kyoko acting in a restaurant. Awesome story - I love your writing style! :)

Really interesting and well done.

Very enjoyable short story, couldn't help but love it. Especially the Kyoko/Ren

lovely!

I loved this! Such great writing!

LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I love fics where Kyouko is an already established famous and wonderful actress, and I especially love tics where Ren and Kyouko are a glamorous power couple. And it's so well-written too! Love the use of an OC to view all their interactions.