what u r doing is not editing its quiting this story is good continue

i really liked it.
i just wished you completed it
the plot and your writing style is great

Can I just say...those long ass reviews left by guest... are awesome! Exactly what I'm thinking... except the tanwhore part lol

Why are you asking people what they think about "new" Edward? He quiet and nice ONE FUCKING DAY and you think that this is the "new" him and that we should all be impressed?

Hes a fucking whore! AND hes mean to bella all the time. Hell, I don't fucking like him at all!

I cant picture how their office is set up. Why would bella have to walk through Edwards to get to hers?

If Edward loves bella then why is he always fucking different women in his office where bella will see?

I don't like how her attraction is only thinly failed by anger...I don't feel like she should like him AT ALL.

So Tanwhore is Edward "friend"? Does he fuck all his friends? In front of the girl he loves?

He sounds like a nasty whore. He was JUST in his office getting it on with someone, bella caught him and right after he has the fucking nerve to hit on her? What a pig.

This is amazing! I really hope you can continue the story.

So far I love the story. I couldn't put it down! It is so so addictive. Anyhoo I would love some more fluff in there but just a bit between Edward and bell

I LOVE THIS STORY!️️️️️️️️️️️️️️

please update

So, I knew even before I started reading this that it was a bad idea. It's been years since you updated, bit im kinda hoping at some point you'll finish posting it anyway.

I think it's a fantastic story, and it's refreshing after what feels like having read the same fic over and over again.

Hey :)

Thisstory is amazing. I love how you have characterized Bella and Edward. It's beena while, or simply 3 years, that you've posted. I was wondering if, by any means, you'd complete this story. It's pretty much engaging :))

Hey doesn't matter how an office really works or any of that u(guest) mentioned.. Boy its jst a fic and evn if Edward's personality sounds creepy n stalker kind.. Well that's what sounds intriguing! Eager to know hw da story n characters develop and plz do UPDATE ASAP! u could jst ignore the negative remarks n continue please? I would if i wer you!

Hi! Idk y u would jst stop with just 4 chapters! Could u plz take it forward? I really really want to know more about this, its pretty interesting..

This is an amazing start! I love the storyline! I love how you have made Edward and Bella! I cant wait for more! I wish you would update and soon! This is so heartfelt and moving! So please update! And soon!

Isabella Jame Swan Cullen XxX