Yay! My favourite chapter is back up! I’m a shameless Jazz lover and love how you write him especially XD It’s cool how you’re tweaking certain things, I’ve noticed a few edited sentences and like how the flow is better in certain places. With everything going on in the world right now it’s nice to remind myself of these stories and characters, it really helps cheer me up. Hope everything is going well for you and can’t wait for the next upload - be it Detroit, Transformers or something completely new!
Sapph

Dude I freaking love this story so much and I am so happy you’re revamping some of the older stuff. Rereading these chapters is just like talking to an old friend. For some reason, I find this story/series so comforting and I seriously do not want it to end.
I’m sorry I review so often, I know you’re probably not too stoked with getting the same few people reviewing over and over again as opposed to new readers, but I really feel like I could give 1000 reviews to this series and they’d all be 100% sincere.
Keep being an awesome writer, Ghost. And follow your dreams.

when Cry is talking with Ratchet and Perceptor after her forest escapade, she says, "I really don't think of myself as a person." Not a big typo, but hilarious. I know she's having trouble getting used to the metal body, but that's a serious existential issue right there XD

I’ve always liked this chapter, especially the ending. :P

Would go back and reread it sometimes until you removed the chapters to update them again. I’m happy it’s back up now so I can continue enjoying it. Thank you for taking the time to repost the older chapters! I feel oddly excited to get the next one, even though I’ve read this fic a bunch of times in the past.

((Ps: my other favorite chapter is Broken, and I’m looking forward to reading that when it gets reuploaded too. Love your characterization of Red Alert))

I forgot how much I enjoyed this chapter..
I feel bad for the dinobots though. They're sort of neglected by most. Happily, they have another person now.
I love the parts where Grimlock is talking with Crystal. He seems to understand perhaps what she's going through and is willing to accept her how she is, even if she looks different from the Crystal he once knew.
And poor Ironhide, he's so baffled :P

I love this so freakin much! new favourite story! I think i broke the like button...

I love this series! I went to re-read this, but discovered there's only a few chapters now... What happened to the rest? Will you be re-uploading them?

What happened to the story? All the chapters are gone!

I really like this one as the intro. It paves the way for Crys to start interacting with all the others. I also enjoy how Ratchet is so in tune with human culture that he uses their phrases like "do no harm" and "dog me". It really humanises him and lets your readers better sympathise because he's working so hard on being sympathetic in turn to Crys.

This is such a beautiful and angst-riddled chapter, and it's definitely one of my favourites!

I know you recently updated Rising Generations but I just had to go back and re-re-re-read (this is my 4th time reading this series) the ones before it. I love this collection SO MUCH! YOU ARE AMAZING!

GODDAMMIT I LOVED THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I TOTALY LOVE SUNSTREAKER AND CRYSTAL TOGETHER BUT AT THE SAME TIME IM CRYING CAUSE THIS IS WHERE SHE GETS TAKEN TO THE DECEPTICONS. (yeah I'm totally not reading over your entire series again) FDIBHEBJHDOWIBHFDIFBHUEIFHVBF I WILL LOVE SUNSTREAKER FOREVER HE IS MY LOVE AND ANGEL AND MY SUN PLEASE BE MINE UGHHHHH. I love prowl too but he's too serious sometimes! :P jazz is honestly gr8 too but I feel like he and Crystal just wouldn't be a really realistic couple. Anyways, bye bye! SUNSTREAKER I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

She went from taking down a giant Amazon woman, to breaking her hand someone's shoulder. Hahahahahaha!

This was a really interesting story. I like that she doesn't have a spark, because was always one of the most far-fetched parts in the human turned Autobots stories.

Okay so I was reading secret life of deceptions when I found out about this one. The end was so sad! I'm still unsure how crystal looks like so it would really help if you wrote a description out maybe.

I believe that most who read the previous installments were put off by the summary.
I'm not sure why but even u was reluctant to continue reading...it's really odd cause this is a great story..