I really like this story, and the shipping. The idea of a workaholic Nat and Rebecca with her work is hilarious. I can't wait until the next update! ;D

This story is amazing, please update!

I really love this fic. You have a gift for portraying Bartimaeus' personality. I also love the fact that there are little to no mistakes, because I am somewhat of a grammar/spelling freak. Anyways, great story. My vote is going to be no on the mpreg. Peace. \/

I would love some mpreg, and if you you make Nathaniel the "mother", that would be even better! Let the public wonder;D

Am really against Mpreg.
Really like the story so far.

Mpreg! Mpreg! Mpreg! Please containue! This fics Awsome LOVE IT update soon, I beg of you ;D

I love this story! :D i hope you update again soon!

Please update! I want to see where Nat and Barty will go on their date! :D can't wait for next chapter.

The world needs more Bart/Nat! (by world I mean me :P)

Please continue.

Hey I just wanted to mention that in the first chapter you mentioned that Nouda was a djinni. He actually wasn't; He was an 'Unidentified Being of the Other Place' And that's pretty much all we know other than he's balls-out crazy. Just an FYI, broski. ;)

hey, that happens to me too! like i write a first draft, then the final turns out almost entirely different by the fourth paragraph,

lol, barti is like 'damn u nat. the one time i NEED u to notice details, you dont!'

wheres the little note for (6)? lol, oooh, barty, ur stuck in ur own body! just be happy it is ptolomys, not that form u used to mock one of solomons wives with...

roller coaster...maybe not, but im sure you could substitute that for wagons. im sure they were just as bumpy.

wats the point of hitting ur head in a tree if it wont hurt? lol nice story