Awwww Ash is the cutest little rascal X3

Well, this was a nice story. It certainly got alot darker than I was expecting from the beginning. There was a nice mix of character development, interaction and action. The cast of original characters were interesting, with plenty of antagonists that make you want to punch them in the face. I really enjoyed seeing Ash's and May's feelings develop over he course of the story as they became closer explored new boundaries. The story had me in suspense for many parts, like the surf race and the whole Ross incident. I was especially worried that Max had actually died near the end.

I am happy that Brock also got his own happy ending in this story. As excessive as his flirting is, he deserves happiness. It is easy to tell this story was made before Pokemon Diamond and Pearl was released with the names used. Thanks for posting the story here to be read, and thank you CyberCubed for writing this story. It was roller coaster from start to finish. While there were many great moments, I think nothing will top Max teleporting to May while she was intimate with Ash.

one of the greatest story keep it up!

this is one of the greatest story i have ever the writer so much for writing such a awesome story.

You know, pokemon surfing sounds awfully similar to the tour-de-altomare or whatever its called that Ash and Misty raced in in the Pokémon movie Pokémon Heroes... So basically Ash should have some experience, the difference is they'll be using surf boards instead of surf pods or whatever they were called.

Thank god, May actually has a brain!

its like a fucked up pokemon movie lol

So much brutality...

Sorry for all you ashay [ ash x may] But may clearly doesnt like ash. Its Brenden she cares about. There are more Brenmay fanfics then ashmay ones. Sorry also for Drewmay fans. [ drew x may ]

One of My Favorite Fanfictions of all time

This is the best!

To this day this still stands as one of the best fics I've ever read, GG cybercubed. I loved all the plots and the constant flow of action, wish it was longer xD I'd totally buy this. Truly a masterpiece.

What a truly fantastic fanfiction

pervashence: the theory that ash is secretly a massive pervert and player.

Officially this is the best Advanceshipping I ever had the pleasure reading! In the past when I first read this piece of art I believed that a sequel would one day appear but than again it must have taken a lot of fatigue and fun t write this that in the end it wasn't necessary. Awesome work congrats!