Oh, Crawly. Well done Gabriel, you chose the perfect angel to send to him.

Sniff... touching.

This is really lovely. I like how you made putting Aziraphale there Gabriel's choice.

Oh this is wonderful. You manage to brilliantly characterize both Crawly/Crowley and Gabriel so, so well. I did like the faint romantic angle here, but more than anything, I really liked how well you captured the dichotomy between Crowley and Gabriel - and how, like, external it is, really. The repeated touch of the eye-colour change was really lovely, too.

Basically, a favorite.

This is really interesting. I can picture Crowley falling by accident, and your Gabriel is an interesting character. Nice job with this!

Aww. Aww, just... aww. That's so adorable. And angsty. And perfect. :)

Excellently done. Heartwrenching and poignant, and well written to boot. You've got a winner here. :D

More a portrait of Gabriel, actually, than of Crawly (nice to see you use his original demonic name). Very nicely written, and with a - or, rather THE central problem: What's all that eternal love and forgiveness REALLY about?

It's all that asking of questions that's the problem, and Gabriel is very close to asking a few of his own.

Very nice!