The right mindset is an important factor in bringing about success. Excellent job.

Because that's all you need in the end, right? Believe? Well I think beautiful.

Story deserves a lot more reviews and favorites. Fantastic job.

Really good for being that short of a story. It is 100% true on how the Chief would react.
How much does a spartan way in armor though? Anyways...
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Short, so I can't go too in-depth. Still, think this was well done. John's single line is fitting to his character.

I applaud you. The Chief doesn't look nor sound out of character unlike other fanfiction I've read. Also, it takes a good writer to be able to convey so much feeling into such a small passage.

"You just have to believe."

I'll have to quote that.

A very nice oneshot :) You completely capture Master Chief's character!

Everyone needs a cause to believe in. Everyone needs a hero to live up to... I wonder who's Chief's hero is. That would probably make a good one-shot right there...

this was a very interesting short emotional story, keep it up

Hey great job you actually got me smiling and gunning for a fight now. Lol keep it up

An interesting short. Never really thought about the possibility that Spartns could take wounding damage like that, but it is logical after a fashion. I'll have to consider this one thoroughly.

Keep it coming, well worth the quick read.

Short, but good. The fact that you were able to convey that much feeling into such a short piece proves you're a great writer. You portrayed the Chief perfectly, not talking much, but what he says always has a powerful meaning. Wish I could read more, though I know it's a one shot. Very good job, and continue on writing!

Very inspiring. A little short, but still insipiring.

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keep writing

-madori-

I really liked this, it was short but good! I found you really captured John and how he would act in a situation where he was injured - stubborn and despite the pain, he pushed on without complaint or time to rest. Great job. -RK