I don't usually venture to this part of the web, but here I am. I thought that this was a pure masterpiece. You are one of pure literary and sensual excellence. I salute you.

THE SEX IS THE BEST PART

I love it!

This was so cute! I loved the end! You really captured the innocence of Cass! :)

I love it

I LOVED this! You're an excellent writer. It's hard to find good fanfic that actually has proper grammar in it lol. Keep it up! :)

Please, keep writing. Become the next whoever person that writes a book like fifty shades o' grey, PLEASE!
- btw, so up for the shipping of dean and cas

Hey don't sell yourself short it was good, good end line

But... But... But... I want to read the sex scene!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and find it to be fairly realistic of how their relationship would unfold. I think you did a marvelous job and I appreciate the effort you put into it. Definitely a new favorite destiel story!

"Got a pigeon to shoot."
that line.

Read this what, three times now. Second time I was a bit annoyed at the missing sex scene but reading it again I realise that it works better without it, with it the little passage in the morning would have lost something.

Okay I'm getting the feeling (by your A/N) that this was written very close to Castiel being introduced to the show. If so, damn you predicted one of if not THE largest ship in our fandom lol. Don't complain this was a pretty awesome fic. Love the ending. And watching Cas pull the classic one night stand is so new for me. The whole get up, drink beer, says it's never happening again, dresses and disappearing. It's so human that it's kind of cool seeing Cas do it.

I doubt Cas would be sarcastic at that point in the series, but other than that they were both in character and I liked the story. The pigeon part was especially amusing.

No apologies necessary... It was sweet hot and funny, what more could a slash reader want.