I realize this is a really old story, but if you ever decided to add on to it, you'd most definitely have an eager reader. Its well written and I definitely think you have enough plot in there to make a legitimate story and not just smut :)

how terrible for his wife

well i think its awesome LOL, and i wish there was more, :P

hoping you add to it :)

that was really good

make another story like this! continue

I think you should continue it.

Bwahahah, loved it. Very unlikely, but great as a little (semi-porn :P)fic! I do hope you have another sleepless night which leads to this being continued!

ahha. very mature

xx emily

it was good. i liked it and it would be cool if you continued it but please update queen of pages first! please!

yeah, this story is open to continue and i hope you do, you write really well, hope you update soon, ;-D

Great story! I know this is a one-shot but I really think you should continue it! there are so few good Kel/Roald stories out there. Keep up the good work, and please please PLEASE continue this story! :D

I liked it, graphic, but not overly-done. The question is, after? Will there be a follow up to this one-hpt or will you gradually mount up to it in Queen of Pages?

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Amusing? Yes. But what about AFTER the sex?