Ratchet's reaction was perfect!
"Thank Primus! Its normal!"

not bad

its funny!

Ah Ive been hit pimp down pimp dowm
I must was my favorite part loved it

"It was perfect."

So true.

And I thought Bumblebee was gullible. Aunt Jazz, what is he thinking?

This story was so funny! It didn't stick to the traditional Optimus, and eviated a little from the traditional ELita. But that's okay! Me and my sister make up oral stories involving the Transformers, and we change the characters to better suit our needs. Thanks, I needed a good laugh

That made me laugh SO hard! And it wasn't TOO crazy. You had JUST enough insanity. Great job!

Awsome love the ending.

"Whatcha doin'? Naming the sparkling? Name it "Metallica". No…wait… Don't name it Metallica. I'm going to save that one for my first sparkling."

Wait, doesn't he already have, like, twenty-three other kids (I read that ask Barricade and Bumblebee thing)?

I love this story. I've read it at least fifteen times and it's funny every time. :3

This story is so funny. I'm glad i went to your account after kibble beasts. She wern't lying. These stories are awsome.

*applause*

Yay! Fantastic ending!

*looks for squeal*

"You tried to make mommy kill me didn't you."

Priceless!

And the thing that Jazz says, I WILL post that quote on my profile by Thursday! Promise!

~fantasy

P.S. Great chapter!

OMG! I love Diesel's "Where do babies come from" moment. I actually fell off my chair laughing!

Please tell me what Ironhide suggested! My creativity isn't working today (hence why I haven't been writing and only reading fanfics lately).

~fantasy

Oh no Cravings!

Run for your life!

~fantasy ;)

O! This is getting good!